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Selina
Cdn Flirt 4 Life Junior Member Age: 20 Gender: Joined: 27 Mar 2007 Posts: 130 Location: Ontario, Canada Karma: +4/-0 Points: 61310 Account : 0 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances Level: 10 HP: 6 / 230    3% MP: 110 / 110    100% EXP: 10 / 22    45%	Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:08 pm    Post subject:  The River Description: a poem I wrote then I was pissed...   The River Chills flow down my spine And I claim that I'm fine. Yet deep inside I'm at war Fighting the floods within. Flooded with the anger of Thor, Deep down to the very core. Angry with the way of the world When Heaven is ripped savagely away. Flooded with an intense pain That makes me wonder if I'm sane. Remembering the frailty of a broken heart Still being pieced carefully back together. Flooded with a rampaging jealousy On display for the world to see. Comparing myself to the pretty girls That all the guys drool over daily. Flooded with the ever lasting love, Carried through the skies by a dove. Which wipes away the emotions of hatred With a burning river of passion and affection.
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Karaden
I am Karaden Tientos, do not underestimate me Age: 17 Gender: Joined: 28 Nov 2005 Posts: 472 Location: In my land of dreams Karma: +7/-2 Points: 2081560 Game Trophies:  25 Hall Of Fame Member View My Character Account : 2147483647 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances, Super Moderator Level: 20 HP: 44 / 893    5% MP: 426 / 426    100% EXP: 6 / 52    11%	Posted: Wed Jan 23, 2008 10:17 pm    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   o.O You weren't joking when you said you were mad... I felt the anger. ^.^ Very good though, I like the rhyming. Current Mood:     Mood When Posted:
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Selina
Cdn Flirt 4 Life Junior Member Age: 20 Gender: Joined: 27 Mar 2007 Posts: 130 Location: Ontario, Canada Karma: +4/-0 Points: 61310 Account : 0 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances Level: 10 HP: 6 / 230    3% MP: 110 / 110    100% EXP: 10 / 22    45%	Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:45 am    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   Thanks hun...you really felt my anger? I love it when people can feel the emotions I'm filled with when writing the poem...but I ended it reminding myself how much I care for him.
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Karaden
I am Karaden Tientos, do not underestimate me Age: 17 Gender: Joined: 28 Nov 2005 Posts: 472 Location: In my land of dreams Karma: +7/-2 Points: 2081560 Game Trophies:  25 Hall Of Fame Member View My Character Account : 2147483647 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances, Super Moderator Level: 20 HP: 44 / 893    5% MP: 426 / 426    100% EXP: 6 / 52    11%	Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 2:49 am    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   I could seem to. Isn't the best poetry that way? A way to remove the toxins from your system so you can focus on the good. ^.^ Current Mood:     Mood When Posted:
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Selina
Cdn Flirt 4 Life Junior Member Age: 20 Gender: Joined: 27 Mar 2007 Posts: 130 Location: Ontario, Canada Karma: +4/-0 Points: 61310 Account : 0 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances Level: 10 HP: 6 / 230    3% MP: 110 / 110    100% EXP: 10 / 22    45%	Posted: Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:12 pm    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   Well I find that when I'm emotional, no matter what emotion, if it fills me so completely as this anger, than I can write to the point that everyone feels my anger. Or if I was as happy as I am now, I could write an amazing uplifting poem. I'm so happy. Just got an email about getting an interview for tuesday afternoon!!
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Karaden
I am Karaden Tientos, do not underestimate me Age: 17 Gender: Joined: 28 Nov 2005 Posts: 472 Location: In my land of dreams Karma: +7/-2 Points: 2081560 Game Trophies:  25 Hall Of Fame Member View My Character Account : 2147483647 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances, Super Moderator Level: 20 HP: 44 / 893    5% MP: 426 / 426    100% EXP: 6 / 52    11%	Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 6:49 pm    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   Well that is definately good. I wasted my good mood that I had the other day. I should have written twenty poems but instead I just smiled and laughed all day. It was wonderful. Current Mood:     Mood When Posted:
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Selina
Cdn Flirt 4 Life Junior Member Age: 20 Gender: Joined: 27 Mar 2007 Posts: 130 Location: Ontario, Canada Karma: +4/-0 Points: 61310 Account : 0 Points Loan : 0 Points Jobs: Allowances Level: 10 HP: 6 / 230    3% MP: 110 / 110    100% EXP: 10 / 22    45%	Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 6:12 am    Post subject:  Re: The River Description:   sounds like me....super emotional, but didn't write anything.
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